Arthur Godfrey

would yo u please read and comment on this write? TY?
Okay…I’ve been asked to hand in some lyrics to a blusey/country sort of band & wondered if this start could be blusey/country or is it too Frank Sinatry? Gene Autry? Chris Daughtery, Arthur Godfrey? You opinions will determine if this one dies an early death. Bwh ha ha ha hah) (try singing it…?)
…………………………One Mind…………………………
I had someone in mind, when I happened to find
It wasn’t really true when that someone wasn’t you
I had some place in mind of a totally different kind
Than the places I went with you
But it was only to find that you had in mind
The identical totally different place too
I’ve come to the conclusion it’s been an odd delusion
And we’ve only been fighting time
With light on the illusion to clear the mental confusion
Perhaps we could be of one mind
Chorus …won’t bother if you vote nay on the way it sounds. Kay? And thank you…
not bluesy/to much Frank ,,,needs more pain to be bluesy,more despair,and not country doesn’t have that dang my dog died to it,….hope this helps,just my opinion
Arthur Godfrey for Lipton Soups